Something I've just started making

2009-11-29 06:17:07

#1

JakAttaK: csanva<3; +492|6537|England

This is a new track I started at about half one last night. Woke up this morning, added that tiny bit of "bass" to it and thats it. I'm stuck already. I wouldn't normally do this but I thought I would ask the members of bf2s what they think I should do with it. As of yet I don't know where to take it, so wanted some input
It's a laid back track, a bit dark, not dancey or anything. So yeh, tell me what you think

http://soundcloud.com/jakmorley/help

The bit where there is no piano is where I don't know where to go. I know something else should come in, maybe the piano go out, maybe it stay in,e but this is my first attempt at doing something as chilled as this, so I'm not really sure.

Ta for any help xx

http://soundcloud.com/csanva

2009-11-29 06:28:10

#2

Hakei: Banned; +295|6207

I think it's slightly too quick to repeat as much as it does. Slow it down a touch and maybe you'll have an easier time thinking up something. It's an okay beat.

2009-11-29 06:30:19

#3

JakAttaK: csanva<3; +492|6537|England

I didn't make the beat, it's sampled. I'm not really good enough to try and slow down a beat either. I wouldn't know where to start. What do you mean by the first bit?

EDIT- I think you mean it's too repetitive in the short amount of time the song actually is at the moment? If that is what you mean, thats exactly why I posted it. I need to add stuff to make it seem less repetitive, but I don't really know what.

Last edited by JakAttaK (2009-11-29 06:31:32)

http://soundcloud.com/csanva

2009-11-29 09:21:34

#4

Miggle: FUCK UBISOFT; +1,411|6953|FUCK UBISOFT

1. Sample Vocals from an obscure movie
2. Make mad bank
3. ?????
4. Profit

2009-11-29 09:36:50

#5

JakAttaK: csanva<3; +492|6537|England

Hmm, that sounds like a good idea

http://soundcloud.com/csanva

2009-11-29 09:49:18

#6

h4hagen: Whats my age again?; +91|6564|Troy, New York

Miggle wrote:
1. Sample Vocals from an obscure movie
2. Make mad bank
3. ?????
4. Profit

Man speaks the truth.
EDIT: It also seems sorta heavy in the lower ranges and lacking in the mid and high. But Im not very familiar with DNB or anything like that so w/e.

Last edited by h4hagen (2009-11-29 09:50:13)

2009-11-29 09:58:24

#7

Amdi Peter: peut-être; +111|5759|paris

Miggle wrote:
1. Sample Vocals from an obscure movie

How do you do that, sample vocals from a movie?

2009-11-29 09:59:10

#8

liquidat0r: wtf.; +2,223|6839|UK

Amdi Peter wrote:
Miggle wrote:
1. Sample Vocals from an obscure movie
How do you do that, sample vocals from a movie?

Rip the audio to your PC and use it ... ?

2009-11-29 10:03:00

#9

Amdi Peter: peut-être; +111|5759|paris

liquidat0r wrote:
Amdi Peter wrote:
Miggle wrote:
1. Sample Vocals from an obscure movie
How do you do that, sample vocals from a movie?
Rip the audio to your PC and use it ... ?

Sorry for asking, but I've never done anything like that before.

2009-11-29 10:22:07

#10

liquidat0r: wtf.; +2,223|6839|UK

Btw, you have a last.fm page, hehe: http://www.last.fm/music/Jak+Morely

2009-11-29 10:38:50

#11

Gooners: Wiki Contributor; +2,700|6844

liquidat0r wrote:
Btw, you have a last.fm page, hehe: http://www.last.fm/music/Jak+Morely

i've played his song like 15 times, but they never get scrobbled cuz i cant edit the tags on these aiff files

2009-11-29 11:28:43

#12

Uzique: dasein.; +2,865|6682

145BPM future-garage or you're not cool anymore

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2009-11-29 12:02:24

#13

Microwave: _; +515|6866|Loughborough Uni / Leeds, UK

I'm just writing this as I'm listening....

The start, when the drums come in they should happen twice as often, I see what you're trying to do and it's good.

Also, the end of each drum burst have it faded out rather than an abrupt stop.

Maybe for a next bridge section have some solo staccato strings then gradually add back in the bass, a bit of classic reverse cymbal then back to your main section again.

2009-11-29 12:50:52

#14

JakAttaK: csanva<3; +492|6537|England

liquidat0r wrote:
Btw, you have a last.fm page, hehe: http://www.last.fm/music/Jak+Morely

You spelt my name wrong >< ><It's Morley. But other than that

james@alienware wrote:
I'm just writing this as I'm listening....

The start, when the drums come in they should happen twice as often, I see what you're trying to do and it's good.

Also, the end of each drum burst have it faded out rather than an abrupt stop.

Maybe for a next bridge section have some solo staccato strings then gradually add back in the bass, a bit of classic reverse cymbal then back to your main section again.

Yeh I can see how that would work on the drums, will do that next time I open it up and repost.

And that sounds like it could work if I think we're talking about the same thing.

A thought I had also was writing some lyrics for it. Not like a whole song. Just like. A couple of lines or something. Glad you guys like it

http://soundcloud.com/csanva

2009-11-29 13:08:36

#15

JakAttaK: csanva<3; +492|6537|England

h4hagen wrote:
Miggle wrote:
1. Sample Vocals from an obscure movie
2. Make mad bank
3. ?????
4. Profit
Man speaks the truth.
EDIT: It also seems sorta heavy in the lower ranges and lacking in the mid and high. But Im not very familiar with DNB or anything like that so w/e.

Normally that's not something I would do. But I really wanted the piano to cut through the mix, and the same with whatever I plan to put in to accompany the piano.
Check out Empty Streets by Cyantific. Sort of approach I'm going for. Except that whole track is very low end based.

http://soundcloud.com/csanva

2009-11-29 13:27:50

#16

Gooners: Wiki Contributor; +2,700|6844

JakAttaK wrote:
h4hagen wrote:
Miggle wrote:
1. Sample Vocals from an obscure movie
2. Make mad bank
3. ?????
4. Profit
Man speaks the truth.
EDIT: It also seems sorta heavy in the lower ranges and lacking in the mid and high. But Im not very familiar with DNB or anything like that so w/e.
Normally that's not something I would do. But I really wanted the piano to cut through the mix, and the same with whatever I plan to put in to accompany the piano.
Check out Empty Streets by Cyantific. Sort of approach I'm going for. Except that whole track is very low end based.

Wtf i just listened to that and was going to say it reminded me of your track

2009-11-29 14:45:43

#17

liquidat0r: wtf.; +2,223|6839|UK

JakAttaK wrote:
liquidat0r wrote:
Btw, you have a last.fm page, hehe: http://www.last.fm/music/Jak+Morely
You spelt my name wrong >< ><It's Morley. But other than that

oh. cock.

The page is created because I just scrobbled your track a few times. I'll correct my tags now.

@Gooners: Convert it to FLAC or something and you can edit the tags.

2009-11-29 14:49:40

#18

liquidat0r: wtf.; +2,223|6839|UK

You guys that commented on Jak's mis-spelt page, go comment again on the correct one: http://www.last.fm/music/Jak+Morley

2009-11-29 14:53:42

#19

Miggle: FUCK UBISOFT; +1,411|6953|FUCK UBISOFT

liquidat0r wrote:
You guys that commented on Jak's mis-spelt page, go comment again on the correct one: http://www.last.fm/music/Jak+Morley

those are definitely not his hands.

2009-11-29 15:21:31

#20

JakAttaK: csanva<3; +492|6537|England

Haha, nice one liq bbz. And yes Miggle. Yes they are.

http://soundcloud.com/csanva

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