Well for starters you don't need a big black screen with large letters to name every single gun before the clip starts rolling. Just put the text in with the video on the background, show it for a few seconds and make it disappear when the kill comes along. Perhaps add a little music. Make all clips just as long, then you're done.
Other than that there's really not much to 'rate' really. Nothing at all actually.
By the way, I don't think there's a need to introduce a gun again
with the only change being different sights. Just introduce the gun once, show all the kills with sights then move on to the next gun.
Last edited by Shocking (2011-06-21 11:58:52)