FAO- D'n'B heads

2009-09-25 13:23:19

#26

TSI: Cholera in the time of love; +247|6193|Toronto

I likes it, esp the inclusion of "natural" keyboard.

I like pie.

2009-09-25 13:30:37

#27

liquidat0r: wtf.; +2,223|6839|UK

I scrobbled the track on last.fm, woop!

(JackAttack sent me the lossless file and a made a V0 VBR MP3 version.)

2009-09-25 17:59:13

#28

Ty: Mass Media Casualty; +2,398|6986|Noizyland

Okay I think it's pretty damn good. The vocal track... yeah, that's the one thing I'd criticise. Musically it's okay but random snaps of voice never sounds good to me.

I think it'd sound better if the drums were more prominant and "busier" for want of a better term. You know, faster high-hat, more complex snare.

I don't have the best set up regarding bass, it sounded pretty good to me but I think it could sound awesome if you gave the bass some effects; something just to change it from being kind of a constant repeditive hum in the background to something you're actually listening to.

Superior Mind wrote:
Needs more deep bass. The kinda wave lengths and frequencies that blow womens clothes off.

This too.

Really good though man.

[Blinking eyes thing]
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2009-09-25 21:41:48

#29

DefCon-17: Maple Syrup Faggot; +362|6368|Vancouver | Canada

liquidat0r wrote:
I scrobbled the track on last.fm, woop!

(JackAttack sent me the lossless file and a made a V0 VBR MP3 version.)

Me too.

..Although it says "1 listener".

2009-09-25 23:34:29

#30

Catbox: forgiveness; +505|6928

sounds really good...

Love is the answer

2009-09-26 04:23:43

#31

JakAttaK: csanva<3; +492|6538|England

Thanks very much for the kind words guys

Ty wrote:
Okay I think it's pretty damn good. The vocal track... yeah, that's the one thing I'd criticise. Musically it's okay but random snaps of voice never sounds good to me.

I think it'd sound better if the drums were more prominant and "busier" for want of a better term. You know, faster high-hat, more complex snare.

I don't have the best set up regarding bass, it sounded pretty good to me but I think it could sound awesome if you gave the bass some effects; something just to change it from being kind of a constant repeditive hum in the background to something you're actually listening to.
Superior Mind wrote:
Needs more deep bass. The kinda wave lengths and frequencies that blow womens clothes off.
This too.

Really good though man.

Awesome criticism Ty
Thankyou very much. It's literally the 3rd song I've ever made, and was trying new stuff, and it seems to have paid off. In future projects I'm definitely going to add more to the percussion, and try and make the overall song move more. I think thats what was wrong with the bass. It was just steady notes, which make the tune feel flat.

Thanks

http://soundcloud.com/csanva

2009-12-23 06:05:58