TSI
Cholera in the time of love
+247|6189|Toronto
I likes it, esp the inclusion of "natural" keyboard.
I like pie.
liquidat0r
wtf.
+2,223|6836|UK
I scrobbled the track on last.fm, woop!

(JackAttack sent me the lossless file and a made a V0 VBR MP3 version.)
Ty
Mass Media Casualty
+2,398|6983|Noizyland

Okay I think it's pretty damn good. The vocal track... yeah, that's the one thing I'd criticise. Musically it's okay but random snaps of voice never sounds good to me.

I think it'd sound better if the drums were more prominant and "busier" for want of a better term. You know, faster high-hat, more complex snare.

I don't have the best set up regarding bass, it sounded pretty good to me but I think it could sound awesome if you gave the bass some effects; something just to change it from being kind of a constant repeditive hum in the background to something you're actually listening to.

Superior Mind wrote:

Needs more deep bass. The kinda wave lengths and frequencies that blow womens clothes off.
This too.

Really good though man.
[Blinking eyes thing]
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DefCon-17
Maple Syrup Faggot
+362|6365|Vancouver | Canada

liquidat0r wrote:

I scrobbled the track on last.fm, woop!

(JackAttack sent me the lossless file and a made a V0 VBR MP3 version.)
Me too.

..Although it says "1 listener".
Catbox
forgiveness
+505|6925
sounds really good...
Love is the answer
JakAttaK
csanva<3
+492|6535|England
Thanks very much for the kind words guys

Ty wrote:

Okay I think it's pretty damn good. The vocal track... yeah, that's the one thing I'd criticise. Musically it's okay but random snaps of voice never sounds good to me.

I think it'd sound better if the drums were more prominant and "busier" for want of a better term. You know, faster high-hat, more complex snare.

I don't have the best set up regarding bass, it sounded pretty good to me but I think it could sound awesome if you gave the bass some effects; something just to change it from being kind of a constant repeditive hum in the background to something you're actually listening to.

Superior Mind wrote:

Needs more deep bass. The kinda wave lengths and frequencies that blow womens clothes off.
This too.

Really good though man.
Awesome criticism Ty
Thankyou very much. It's literally the 3rd song I've ever made, and was trying new stuff, and it seems to have paid off. In future projects I'm definitely going to add more to the percussion, and try and make the overall song move more. I think thats what was wrong with the bass. It was just steady notes, which make the tune feel flat.

Thanks
JakAttaK
csanva<3
+492|6535|England
Okay, added my latest one
thraSK
Best ___ in Aus
+57|6191
Definitely has a catchy bassline, so props! I like what you did with the vocal as well
JakAttaK
csanva<3
+492|6535|England
Thankyou thraSK
KuSTaV
noice
+947|6720|Gold Coast
The new one is awesome. Although Im not really a 'music person', I do like it.
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JakAttaK
csanva<3
+492|6535|England
Thanks KuSTaV
JakAttaK
csanva<3
+492|6535|England
Sure alot of people don't care, but I know have an artist's myspace
http://www.myspace.com/jakmorleydnb

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