Shahter
Zee Ruskie
+295|6990|Moscow, Russia
that crop kinda... how to phrase that... shifts the accent of the picture away from the building methinks. that doesn't necessarily make it worse, but still it significantly changes the whole composition.

Last edited by Shahter (2011-03-02 06:41:59)

if you open your mind too much your brain will fall out.
Kmar
Truth is my Bitch
+5,695|6815|132 and Bush

Its not often that you see the rule of thirds applied in portrait .
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13urnzz
Banned
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yes, i see that now - for me, i like leading lines to start in a corner. Jens was highlighting the building, and the portrait orientation is nice, with the foreground trees.

Shahter wrote:

that doesn't necessarily make it worse, but still it significantly changes the whole composition.
it's amazing to me how my wife and i can stand feet from each other, and capture wholly different images. i do not critique Jens' picture as much to show how crop and orientation make a big impact on a picture . . .
PrivateVendetta
I DEMAND XMAS THEME
+704|6406|Roma
I'm not sure about all this 'big' and 'significant', but I'm surprises how it does actually change how the picture comes about.
Took me a while of comparing, but something seemed different.
https://static.bf2s.com/files/user/29388/stopped%20scrolling%21.png
Jens howabout ya just retake the photo in front of these trees?

you say "by the sea" where is the sea? building with sea pic. Now!

Last edited by Kimmmmmmmmmmmm (2011-03-04 13:52:21)

13urnzz
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an oil refinery

https://farm6.static.flickr.com/5215/5501601884_5211b61d2c_b.jpg
^ incredible. want more - closer in? i love the colors here

oh hellow mr robin! kind of you to drop in for some western blend seeds.
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iceman785
Member
+93|6887|Alaska, mother fucker.
Man these pictures are great, think it's time I invested in a nice camera.  I've had some amazing chances to get some crazy cool pictures being in Alaska, but the bes thing I've got is a camera phone =/.
13urnzz
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https://farm6.static.flickr.com/5055/5525207466_055036f5d1_b.jpg
13urnzz
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https://farm6.static.flickr.com/5092/5527952789_eaf91399cd_b.jpg
Uzique
dasein.
+2,865|6685
love the colours
libertarian benefit collector - anti-academic super-intellectual. http://mixlr.com/the-little-phrase/
was this taken during your lunch break? ya know, by the old taco bell?
13urnzz
Banned
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why yes, yes it was . . .
CC-Marley
Member
+407|7043
https://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a278/CC-Marley/3-15-11018.jpg
oooh you should see it under macro.
like so https://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b320/lucky795/01_30_11Plants_62-2.jpg
not the best example..  but you see sticky.
Finray
Hup! Dos, Tres, Cuatro
+2,629|6002|Catherine Black

Finray wrote:

Anyway, give my dad a hand, he's trying to get into bigger groups on Flickr but you need a certain amount of faves to post a picture.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/kertesz/
Would be a great help if you could guys
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Wallpaper
+303|6208|The pool
Your dad takes some great landscapes!

Just had my first paid shoot yesterday, did some senior pictures. Excuse the editing, it might be off cause Im using a netbook, its going to be corrected before I deliver it to the client. Heres the first:

https://farm6.static.flickr.com/5292/5548735093_c831ef2131.jpg
First paid shoot! by Gregory Moser, on Flickr
Kmar
Truth is my Bitch
+5,695|6815|132 and Bush

Wallpaper wrote:

Your dad takes some great landscapes!

Just had my first paid shoot yesterday, did some senior pictures. Excuse the editing, it might be off cause Im using a netbook, its going to be corrected before I deliver it to the client. Heres the first:

http://farm6.static.flickr.com/5292/554 … ef2131.jpg
First paid shoot! by Gregory Moser, on Flickr
Might want to use the recovery function in lightroom to bring the details back in where the highlights are.. but then again, i am also on a laptop atm ..lol

congrats.
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Adams_BJ
Russian warship, go fuck yourself
+2,054|6837|Little Bentcock
stretch the picture lengthways too just a touch
i bet she likes the bright look.. esp with the bright shirt and fun lit background. nice catch light!
superstar!
Wallpaper
+303|6208|The pool
Ah, laptop screen fail. Thanks!

Why stretch it vertically?
more like the crop is a bit tight?
Adams_BJ
Russian warship, go fuck yourself
+2,054|6837|Little Bentcock

Wallpaper wrote:

Ah, laptop screen fail. Thanks!

Why stretch it vertically?
it was a joke about her shorter wider face.
Wallpaper
+303|6208|The pool
Hur hur.

Heres another anyway, been wanting to get a shot with this kind of background separation for a while. I wish I lighted it a bit better though

https://farm6.static.flickr.com/5184/5552176919_71c062f47a.jpg
Laura Senior Pictures 2 by Gregory Moser, on Flickr

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