I wrote a poem for my pre-calculus class (yes, we have stupid projects) and we had to have 25 words in it that were required. This probably doesn't make any sense at all, but I would like peoples opinions and advice on what I should change. The required words are highlighted in yellow.
It's titled "The Inescapable Sun"
It was like an imaginary day.
The sun was extraneous and synthetic.
It must have been 200 degrees.
The power was constant and rational.
Horizontal or vertical, you couldn’t escape its intercept.
The term that it stayed in the sky was a factor to the initial asymptote to the horizon.
There was zero escape from it and no solution.
The vertex of the sun was correlated to the top of the sky.
The coefficient of the sun was real.
It was like a graph and the sun was in the middle.
The function of the sun was quadratic.
At the end of the day, the sun’s axis was divided and the sun went to the other side of the Earth.
The remaining sunlight disappeared.
The words I have left over are polynomial, monomial, rate, multiplicity, symmetry, and inequality.
Tell me what I could change to make it look like an actual poem, because right now it isn't one really.
It's titled "The Inescapable Sun"
It was like an imaginary day.
The sun was extraneous and synthetic.
It must have been 200 degrees.
The power was constant and rational.
Horizontal or vertical, you couldn’t escape its intercept.
The term that it stayed in the sky was a factor to the initial asymptote to the horizon.
There was zero escape from it and no solution.
The vertex of the sun was correlated to the top of the sky.
The coefficient of the sun was real.
It was like a graph and the sun was in the middle.
The function of the sun was quadratic.
At the end of the day, the sun’s axis was divided and the sun went to the other side of the Earth.
The remaining sunlight disappeared.
The words I have left over are polynomial, monomial, rate, multiplicity, symmetry, and inequality.
Tell me what I could change to make it look like an actual poem, because right now it isn't one really.
Last edited by Whiplash (2008-12-02 21:39:26)