BF2S Forums Frantic - By [tpi] pGrizzleq www.tpimovies.com

i liked it 

nice editing

nice job

My criticism:

The Video:

- First off, the thing with the music video; nice idea, original but it didn't work.

- The music: didn't like it, also I didn't feel it suited the video.

The content:

- Most of the footage consisted of 1 shot kills; no combos..

- Interesting frag videos require decent combos, people won't enjoy seeing you kill 1 person over and over again.

- You might be one of the best snipers ever but none of those shot reflect that; any one could've pulled them off, especially the ones where you were against non-sniper kits who offered little threat.

- Editing: Ok-ish, you persisted with replaying and zooming in on kills that weren't that spectacular. Some of the editing was nice but not consistent.

- The metallica video in the corner got on my tits and was completely irrelevant and unnecessary.

Good points:

- I liked the credits

- You clearly have the potential to make better movies; see above points for help.

- Oh, I liked the very beginning too.

Good work, It's constructive criticism by the way. Just trying to help +1 for the effort!

aLeX wrote:

My criticism:

The Video:

- First off, the thing with the music video; nice idea, original but it didn't work.

- The music: didn't like it, also I didn't feel it suited the video.

The content:

- Most of the footage consisted of 1 shot kills; no combos..

- Interesting frag videos require decent combos, people won't enjoy seeing you kill 1 person over and over again.

- You might be one of the best snipers ever but none of those shot reflect that; any one could've pulled them off, especially the ones where you were against non-sniper kits who offered little threat.

- Editing: Ok-ish, you persisted with replaying and zooming in on kills that weren't that spectacular. Some of the editing was nice but not consistent.

- The metallica video in the corner got on my tits and was completely irrelevant and unnecessary.

Good points:

- I liked the credits

- You clearly have the potential to make better movies; see above points for help.

- Oh, I liked the very beginning too.

Good work, It's constructive criticism by the way. Just trying to help +1 for the effort!

Okay. I'll try my very best for my next video. I copied these tips/suggestions into a word doc. so I can always read them. Thank you for your comment!

+1 for trying

_-_911_-_180891 wrote:

Thanks for all the positive feedback so far.

I just have one question:

Were any, absolute any shoots good?

Well, those moving distamnce shots against moving targets were pretty good. Also good was the one near the beginning where you sniped a guy about to C4 a friendly tank.

As said before, good shots, but you need to have several kills  in a row and not just clips of single ones.

way to fast :S
getting confused