Ender2309
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k, so i'm writing a counterpoint to the worthiness of black history for the school paper, and i dont want to get shot for it. so tell me, is this tasteful enough to be reasonably secure in my safety?

Every February, it comes and goes. It’s the most racially charged month of the year, and not in a good way.
    Black History Month, although it once served a purpose, has been effectively rendered worthless by several factors.
    Although it’s certainly important to understand the past of America’s minorities, one must not forget his own culture as well. If there is to be a Black History Month in today’s open, generally racially equal society, we must then assign history months for all other cultures as well.
    As the celebration of black history originated in a time of vile racism, it’s certainly understandable that it came to be. However, the month has served its purpose, and because history class doesn’t know skin color, black history month no longer has any true value.
    In fact, Carter G. Wilson, the creator of Negro History Week, the predecessor to Black History Month, fully expected the week to fade out of existence once it served its purpose, which it certainly has.
    As long as black history month exists and stands alone, racism will exist. In a time when black history is fully known to all, it does nothing but place black people on a pedestal. It suggests that black people are somehow less important than the rest of us, and it encourages people to look at blacks in a different light than the rest of the world.
    Not only that, but it suggests that the achievements of the rest of America’s minorities are unimportant and not applicable to everyday life. As many of the greatest comforts in America would not exist without our vast genetic pool, this is utterly untrue. However, as long as blacks and blacks alone have a history month, many people will continue to harbor this view as their own.
    On the other side of the fence, why should black history be confined to one month? The simple answer is that it should not be.
    Black history should be celebrated every single day of the year, as should the histories of all races. Every culture in America is rich and unique, and to expect the achievements, differences, and important aspects of each to be confined to a single month can be described only as ignorant.
    Black History Month is an absurd, worn out practice that should be laid to rest. It has served its purpose and is no longer needed. America has dropped its racist tendencies and has become an open and accepting country.  The histories of our minorities are not some great secret withheld for a few; they are common knowledge fit for the possession of the masses.
“I have a dream that one day this nation will rise up and live out the true meaning of its creed: ‘We hold these truths to be self-evident: that all men are created equal,’” Martin Luther King Jr. once said. “I have a dream that one day on the red hills of Georgia the sons of former slaves and the sons of former slave owners will be able to sit down together at a table of brotherhood.”
    As long as we’re celebrating our differences, and not our similarities, that table of brotherhood cannot exist, and we will find ourselves no closer to equality than Dr. King’s generation.
krazed
Admiral of the Bathtub
+619|7207|Great Brown North
i like it but then again where i live racism has never been a factor so i guess im kind of illinformed and biased

Last edited by krazed (2007-02-04 21:06:51)

Ender2309
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so is that a yes?
ATG
Banned
+5,233|6956|Global Command
Black History Month, although it once served a purpose, has been effectively rendered worthless by several factors.
Reword that line, any bro will get offended right there.
Ender2309
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ATG wrote:

Black History Month, although it once served a purpose, has been effectively rendered worthless by several factors.
Reword that line, any bro will get offended right there.
will do sir.
Superior Mind
(not macbeth)
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Really good, i agree with you on your points.
Fuzzball_the_Shooter
The Photographer.
+81|7132|Central Valley,California
I've ever noticed alot of racism in my town during Black History month. We have alot of neo-Nazi pricks around here too.
krazed
Admiral of the Bathtub
+619|7207|Great Brown North

Ender2309 wrote:

so is that a yes?
yeah its a yes, also ATG does have a point about that one line
lavadisk
I am a cat ¦ 3
+369|7257|Denver colorado
Its a load better then any article that I would EVER find in my school newspaper.
I usually end up throwing it down in disgust at how careful they are in writing them. Yours has a point and tells people something new.

good job.
Turquoise
O Canada
+1,596|6832|North Carolina
Very well written, Ender...    You should be safe...
Ender2309
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Superior Mind wrote:

Really good, i agree with you on your points.
thanks

Fuzzball_the_Shooter wrote:

I've ever noticed alot of racism in my town during Black History month. We have alot of neo-Nazi pricks around here too.
one must redefine racism and look at the world through a different eyeglass to see it.
lavadisk
I am a cat ¦ 3
+369|7257|Denver colorado
Yeah, I think that racism is now the other way around. Its rare to not hear the word 'white boy' being used in my school at least once a day.

Their are obviously exceptions to this; neo-nazi's has already been pointed out.
Ender2309
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lavadisk wrote:

Its a load better then any article that I would EVER find in my school newspaper.
I usually end up throwing it down in disgust at how careful they are in writing them. Yours has a point and tells people something new.

good job.
we're a highschool paper, and we're known to win awards at the collegiate level.

basically we're taught to report the way it's supposed to be (unbiased, unafraid, and worth it) and not write an article if we're afraid of the repercussions.

one other thing, i'm in california, which is one of nine states to be follow the tinker decision, which basically states that we can write whatever the hell we want and the school and state can only stare drop-jawed at it. (the rest follow hazelwood, which means they can basically pull anything they want)

back on topic: thanks.
ScarletPimpFromHell
... this one goes to 11.
+12|6816|Sydney, Australia
You use the work Black a lot in your piece, more often than not as an adjective. This may have a tendency to alienate an African American reader. Although the use of the word Black in the form of a noun, ie Black History Month can't be misinterpreted and therefore couldn't legitimately cause any offense.

You also segregate your potential readers into 'minority groups', probably not the best choice of words if you want to maintain a diverse reader base. You could try something a little warmer ... not necessarily as cold and clinical as the political correctly reference you've chosen.
Ender2309
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ScarletPimpFromHell wrote:

You use the work Black a lot in your piece, more often than not as an adjective. This may have a tendency to alienate an African American reader. Although the use of the word Black in the form of a noun, ie Black History Month can't be misinterpreted and therefore couldn't legitimately cause any offense.

You also segregate your potential readers into 'minority groups', probably not the best choice of words if you want to maintain a diverse reader base. You could try something a little warmer ... not necessarily as cold and clinical as the political correctly reference you've chosen.
what exactly do you mean?
ScarletPimpFromHell
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Ok. I am putting myself into the shoes of an African American reading your piece ...

You start your argument by denouncing the Black History Month as being out of date and relatively useless. (You may fail to realize the symbolic worth of Black History Month and it's importance to your society). This would immediately put me offside. Then you go straight into a defensive position taking the stance that Anglo American history is somehow being viewed as less important during this period.

Throughout the mid section there is an overuse of the term "minory group" which tends to reinforce the idea that a African American, Latino, Chinese, Irish, Italian American etc etc are still regarded as a minority and somewhat secular groups (or sub-cultures) within American Society. Are they all not American citizens ?

Does this help ?
Mr.Pieeater
Member
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If you even have to question yourself, then it is probably too far.  You should take the safe approach so you don't get in trouble at school.  There is no reason to be "accurate", just be "blaccurate" and go with the not too risky approach.

Recommendations:
Talk about Martin Luther King being good.
Racism being bad.
And end with the tragic death of Martin Luther King.

A+ in the making.
Ender2309
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ScarletPimpFromHell wrote:

Ok. I am putting myself into the shoes of an African American reading your piece ...

You start your argument by denouncing the Black History Month as being out of date and relatively useless. (You may fail to realize the symbolic worth of Black History Month and it's importance to your society). This would immediately put me offside. Then you go straight into a defensive position taking the stance that Anglo American history is somehow being viewed as less important during this period.

Throughout the mid section there is an overuse of the term "minory group" which tends to reinforce the idea that a African American, Latino, Chinese, Irish, Italian American etc etc are still regarded as a minority and somewhat secular groups (or sub-cultures) within American Society. Are they all not American citizens ?

Does this help ?
very much so. i'll take this into account when it comes time for revision.

Mr.Pieeater wrote:

If you even have to question yourself, then it is probably too far.  You should take the safe approach so you don't get in trouble at school.  There is no reason to be "accurate", just be "blaccurate" and go with the not too risky approach.

Recommendations:
Talk about Martin Luther King being good.
Racism being bad.
And end with the tragic death of Martin Luther King.

A+ in the making.
did you even read it? that would effectively trash the article, seeing as its the counterpoint. the point would cover things like that.

who said i was questioning myself? as the author, i'm going to be biased, so i asked for the opinions of others.
in my opinion, it's tasteful, but to others, there might be something blaringly obvious that can be classified only as distasteful.
=MCHD= arush5268d
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ScarletPimpFromHell wrote:

You use the work Black a lot in your piece, more often than not as an adjective. This may have a tendency to alienate an African American reader. Although the use of the word Black in the form of a noun, ie Black History Month can't be misinterpreted and therefore couldn't legitimately cause any offense.

You also segregate your potential readers into 'minority groups', probably not the best choice of words if you want to maintain a diverse reader base. You could try something a little warmer ... not necessarily as cold and clinical as the political correctly reference you've chosen.
Screw the whole "African American" bit.  That really ticks me off.  They are not African American,, thank you very much.  Most of them have absoblutely no clue as to what country they come from.  You don't call me European-American, do you?  Minorities call me 'white,' and as well they should.  You can only be called African American if you actually immigrated from Africa.  If your family goes back through 200 years in America...well guess what?  You're American.  Plain and simple.  And no, I'm not racist at all....I'm just tired of everyone making all those non-offensive crap for every bloody minority here in the U.S.  On a side note, the educated black people that I work with (some of who actually immigrated from Africa) do not like, or resent, blacks being generically labeled as "African American."

Black History month should be abolished.  Sorry...but I'm going to go ahead and put it out there.  There really is no longer a point to it.  And you can't have a month for every continent on the planet.  The English, Italians and other Europeans did far more for building this country than Africans being brought over in slave trade. 

Flame me, go ahead.  I really don't care.  But before you flame, pick up a U.S. History book, and pull your head out of your ass and think for yourself.
ScarletPimpFromHell
... this one goes to 11.
+12|6816|Sydney, Australia
To be quite honest, I'm not at all interested in American history.

Ender asked for some critique and I gave him some ... I was focusing on his writing style rather than the historical content.

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