Ok, me and my friend are having a pointless argument... Is this sentance wrong:
"Well, that's the name that first came to my mind at first glance..."
He thinks that there shouldn't be need for the second first, but I do, as:
"Well if I hadn't put in the second "First", then the sentance could have been read as "The name that comes to mind whenever I glance at it" But it doesn't, as I remembered from the first glance that it didn't say "Toiletmade""
What do you think?
"Well, that's the name that first came to my mind at first glance..."
He thinks that there shouldn't be need for the second first, but I do, as:
"Well if I hadn't put in the second "First", then the sentance could have been read as "The name that comes to mind whenever I glance at it" But it doesn't, as I remembered from the first glance that it didn't say "Toiletmade""
What do you think?