Ender2309
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There are many things that exist on this planet that nobody looks forward to doing. Whether it be a job, a chore, or a dirty task, things exist that can turn even the hardest workers into procrastinators. One such deed, perhaps the most problematic of them all, is change. It’s a simple little six-letter word, yet nothing else has such a profound impact on our daily lives.

    Nobody likes change because it’s exactly that. Most would prefer to allow their problems to work themselves out on their own, or would rather sit on what they have instead of risk it all. If one has something good going, its safe to conclude that he’s going to continue doing that task, rather than stop, even at the expense of others. For some, this policy ends up working out in the long run. For most, however, a plethora of potentially problematic situations can arise, ranging from simple material loss to death. Take, for example, the tobacco industry. Tobacco use is one of the biggest causes of cancer, primarily because of what chemicals it’s mixed with to create a useable form. The industry could easily research to create a less carcinogenic form of it, but choose not to because it has no need to. Nobody has provided a need for it, as people who use it do nothing about it because of their extreme need for it. One can also look at the industrial businesses of Western nations, such as those involved in PC manufacturing or automotive technology. Although most, if not all, of the world knows that fossil fuels are awful for the environment, an alternative fuel source has not been established. This lenient tendency can be attributed to one simple fact: the lack of risk factor involved, and the potential for profit gained by staying the course. Those who use these fuels will not be the ones to suffer; it will be the generations to follow that will. To put it simply, change is difficult to do because it requires hard work and self-sacrifice to perform, even when it’s highly beneficial.

    People who don’t want to change won’t. People don’t change because it’s always difficult, and it’s often immensely easier to convince oneself that everything is working out for the better, even if it’s not. Once a lifestyle is formed, a person becomes comfortable with it. Once a person becomes comfortable with a certain way of life, his ability to change it becomes significantly diminished. To plunge the world into darkness in order to save the environment, for example, would be tumultuous. As well, a person will not change if he cannot see a reason for it, like the tobacco industry and carcinogens, even if it may in fact be a good and beneficial act. As well, change involves a certain risk factor that is unattractive to most. If one is sitting on a decent-paying job, he is much less likely to give that up for the chance that he could make more elsewhere, than he is to just ask for a raise. The lack of change in this world is headed by the fears and difficulties involved.

    The greatest single factor in persuading one to change is fear. If the risk of change is less than that of staying as is, a person is much more likely to do it. If those who head the tobacco industry were forced to smoke a cigarette for every pack sold, a carcinogen-free cigarette would be created and advertised within a week. If a person is at risk of losing his job, he is much more likely to risk it all on that chance to make more elsewhere. If one who uses a recreational drug to escape his troubles is told that he will die within a week if he doesn’t discontinue use immediately, he becomes more likely to quit. Fear, because it ties to human beings at an instinctual level, is the single greatest motivator for everything one does, let alone change.
   
       Change, that six-letter word with a thousand impacts, is difficult because logic and reasoning tell us a story of absurdity about it.


just for you r3v4n...even though indent=new paragraph already....



this is my essay for AP comp. topic is change. i need another page and my head is fried today. help!

Last edited by Ender2309 (2006-12-13 21:56:23)

R3v4n
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add paragraphs and ill read it...
~ Do you not know that in the service … one must always choose the lesser of two weevils?
..teddy..jimmy
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Agreed ^^

Last edited by ..teddy..jimmy (2006-12-13 21:45:28)

{BMF}*Frank_The_Tank
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when is it due?
Ender2309
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{BMF}*Frank_The_Tank wrote:

when is it due?
tommorow


......sigh....
R3v4n
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Ender2309 wrote:

just for you fenris...even though indent=new paragraph already....
You just called me fenris..... shame on you now im not going to read it till you apologise...
~ Do you not know that in the service … one must always choose the lesser of two weevils?
{BMF}*Frank_The_Tank
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ooooo.......ouch.......been there before.

A. Is it double spaced?
     1)If so, how much do you have so far?
B. Write something about how Islam extremists want America and Israel to change to Islam, and how both refuse to.  (I dont support the nation changing to Islam by any means, but Im just trying to give this as an idea as it could get lengthy)
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R3v4n wrote:

Ender2309 wrote:

just for you fenris...even though indent=new paragraph already....
You just called me fenris..... shame on you now im not going to read it till you apologise...
haha..sorry..sigs look the same.
Ender2309
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{BMF}*Frank_The_Tank wrote:

ooooo.......ouch.......been there before.

A. Is it double spaced?
     1)If so, how much do you have so far?
B. Write something about how Islam extremists want America and Israel to change to Islam, and how both refuse to.  (I dont support the nation changing to Islam by any means, but Im just trying to give this as an idea as it could get lengthy)
A.) yes

B.) 2 pages and 2 inches.


           good idea. thanks. +!
R3v4n
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Ender2309 wrote:

{BMF}*Frank_The_Tank wrote:

ooooo.......ouch.......been there before.

A. Is it double spaced?
     1)If so, how much do you have so far?
B. Write something about how Islam extremists want America and Israel to change to Islam, and how both refuse to.  (I dont support the nation changing to Islam by any means, but Im just trying to give this as an idea as it could get lengthy)
A.) yes

B.) 2 pages and 2 inches.


           good idea. thanks. +!
also to help make all your text 1.5 line spacing, and size 14
~ Do you not know that in the service … one must always choose the lesser of two weevils?
Spark
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Isn't it strange that conservatism by definition is cautious of change...
The paradox is only a conflict between reality and your feeling what reality ought to be.
~ Richard Feynman
Ender2309
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Spark wrote:

Isn't it strange that conservatism by definition is cautious of change...
not to be an ass...but....whats your point? seriously.


just to provide a bit more info, its supposed to be a fairly general essay, meaning i need to touch on a broad scope of examples.

thus, each example cannot take too much time or space to change.
{BMF}*Frank_The_Tank
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R3v4n wrote:

Ender2309 wrote:

{BMF}*Frank_The_Tank wrote:

ooooo.......ouch.......been there before.

A. Is it double spaced?
     1)If so, how much do you have so far?
B. Write something about how Islam extremists want America and Israel to change to Islam, and how both refuse to.  (I dont support the nation changing to Islam by any means, but Im just trying to give this as an idea as it could get lengthy)
A.) yes

B.) 2 pages and 2 inches.


           good idea. thanks. +!
also to help make all your text 1.5 line spacing, and size 14
Yeah, but its AP comp, my guess is the teacher is competent enough to notice that lol.  You could try widening the spaces on each side of the page, from the standard 1 to like 1.2, or 1.5, to like 1.7.....not alot, but enough to stretch it out a bit.
Ender2309
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{BMF}*Frank_The_Tank wrote:

R3v4n wrote:

Ender2309 wrote:


A.) yes

B.) 2 pages and 2 inches.


           good idea. thanks. +!
also to help make all your text 1.5 line spacing, and size 14
Yeah, but its AP comp, my guess is the teacher is competent enough to notice that lol.  You could try widening the spaces on each side of the page, from the standard 1 to like 1.2, or 1.5, to like 1.7.....not alot, but enough to stretch it out a bit.
set to the default 1.25 as always. (read that in a cool, suave, voice. it sounds better. chips)
Fenris_GreyClaw
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Ender2309 wrote:

R3v4n wrote:

Ender2309 wrote:

just for you fenris...even though indent=new paragraph already....
You just called me fenris..... shame on you now im not going to read it till you apologise...
haha..sorry..sigs look the same.
Ender2309
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spark, thanks. you've sparked an idea in my mind.
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Ender2309 wrote:

{Hi, I'm Ender and this is my paper for AP comp!}

Ender2309 wrote:

{BMF}*Frank_The_Tank wrote:

when is it due?
tommorow
Look, I'm going to be honest. It is a mess.

If I was an English instructor, that paper would get a D for rambling, obvious padding, over-blocky paragraphs, tired prose, parroted points, sloppy, overextended grammar and for the misspelling of the word 'usable.' If I was a high school teacher who wanted to keep his job, then a C- (for some amount of effort) with additional written emphasis encouraging you to do your homework next time.

But if your teacher was a Quake nerd back in the day, he'll probably let you off light.

Last edited by unnamednewbie13 (2006-12-13 22:54:42)

Ess
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but you are not an English teacher so I fail to see the relevance of your post. Its just your opinion and totally unhelpful
unnamednewbie13
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Ess wrote:

but you are not an English teacher so I fail to see the relevance of your post. Its just your opinion and totally unhelpful
...but I've corrected English teachers in class before. The fact that he's asking for help from us and now from a forum full of English teachers belies your accusation of irrelevance. Anyway, I pointed out the elements that need work, and gave a very good suggestion:

Do. Your. Homework.

So, where's your godsend fix for his paper? Who's not being helpful, now?


===

Further to Ender:

Get started on extended assignments the day they're given. Even if you only get one sentence through, it'll break the tendency to put the whole thing off until the last minute, forcing you to turn to us knuckleheads for help.

Last edited by unnamednewbie13 (2006-12-14 01:55:28)

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