DaBombadier
Member
+8|6415|Sooooo coooold....Canada....
Hey everyone this is a poem I wrote about a girl that rejected me a few days back, let me know what you think and also, should I ask her out again???

                                           Stuck In My Head

I remember that night, that one starry night,
I had a crazy thought,
I couldn't sleep, cuz I kept thinking,
"Man, that girl is hot"
So the next day we met face-to-face,
And I asked her out to lunch,
She said no, my heart stopped beating,
Oh man that was a rock-hard punch,
I tried to forget her,
But she kept showing up in my head,
I couldn't feel my heart beat anymore,
So it had to be fed,
The questions, gossiping, emberassment,
That'e one heck of a fee,
But her eyes, her hair, and even her tears,
They all look so fine to me,
So ever since that one starry night, my thoughts are filled with her,
Whenever my time is free,
All these thoughts, all these emotions,
They're like a little tree,
Keeps growing, budding, blossoming,
These roots aren't gonna die,
This poem I wrote for her,
I guess you're wondering why,
I don't really know,
It's all so confusing,
Don't know which way to go...

Last edited by DaBombadier (2007-01-20 18:58:03)

usmarine2007
Banned
+374|6375|Columbus, Ohio
I suggest letting it go before she thinks you are a stalker.
D6717C
Anger is a gift
+174|6641|Sin City

Yeah, find somebody else. I mean, if I kicked you in the nutz once, would you want me to do it again? Even with a poem my guess is no.
DaBombadier
Member
+8|6415|Sooooo coooold....Canada....
ok thx guys
scottomus0
Teh forum ghey!
+172|6645|Wigan. Manchester. England.
Aww lol. They are right in a way, but why did she reject you? You ugly? joking

How old are you aswell?
DaBombadier
Member
+8|6415|Sooooo coooold....Canada....
i'm only 12.... and she basically said that she thought we were just friends
l41e
Member
+677|6656

DaBombadier wrote:

i'm only 12.... and she basically said that she thought we were just friends
Happened to me once. Don't feel too bad if you can help it. It'll keep them from going "omg emo kid", at least.
ghettoperson
Member
+1,943|6657

usmarine2007 wrote:

I suggest letting it go before she thinks you are a stalker.
Eugefunk84
Member
+48|6542
i got 10 years on ya bud, and u gotta learn to take hits like this cuz as u grow up, theyre only gonna get more serious, and more painful. my gf of 18 months cheated on me last summer and i gave that biatch the boot. just gotta learn to let go when u need to. the poem needs a little work, some subtlety perhaps. i wouldnt give it to her at any rate or ask her out either
chittydog
less busy
+586|6843|Kubra, Damn it!

It's best to learn now that No mean No. If she shot you down, so what? Let it go and find someone better.
Jello.01
Member
+46|6616|DFW, Texas
Pft, 12. Just wait until high school, that's where it's all at.
DaBombadier
Member
+8|6415|Sooooo coooold....Canada....
Thanks everyone great advice, I guess I should let her go. Time to find another hot girl!!

Last edited by DaBombadier (2007-01-21 12:39:57)

HSG
Member
+23|6482|British Columbia, Canada

Jello.01 wrote:

Pft, 12. Just wait until high school, that's where it's all at.
exactly wut he said.
wah1188
You orrible caaaaaaan't
+321|6468|UK
Are you serious don't bother with her.
usmarine2007
Banned
+374|6375|Columbus, Ohio
Ya man she is 12, and they way the teens are acting now and days, she will have 2 kids by the time she is 16, or get shot at school.  Move on.
jimbo21
Member
+11|6659
u need to change all the "her" and all the "she" to "you" so it sounds as if you are reading the poem to her. also i would change the line "cuz I kept thinking" to "i couldn't stop thinking" to match the line "I couldn't sleep".
my advice to you and good luck even though she may or maynot be worth it. there are more fish in the sea don't worry. (aleast your not gay)
r'Eeee
That's how I roll, BITCH!
+311|6456

jimbo21 wrote:

(aleast your not gay)
lol, know thats the best advice I have ever heared.

But yea good luck mate, u could just give it a try!
DaBombadier
Member
+8|6415|Sooooo coooold....Canada....
this isn't really intended for her whether she reads it or not (I posted it on my site). It kinda just tells the story about all this.

Last edited by DaBombadier (2007-01-21 16:05:00)

|=-sL-=|.Cujucuyo.
Member
+26|6391|California

usmarine2007 wrote:

I suggest letting it go before she thinks you are a stalker.
Stalking is another way of saying "I Love you''.





j/k
unholypoo
unholy what?
+10|6389

rabee2789b wrote:

jimbo21 wrote:

(aleast your not gay)
lol, know thats the best advice I have ever heared.

But yea good luck mate, u could just give it a try!
Ha, I didn't get a girlfriend till I was 15, and all my friends were like 'holy shit I thought you were gay dood!!'
Bubbalo
The Lizzard
+541|6569

usmarine2007 wrote:

I suggest letting it go before she thinks you are a stalker.
Or he could become a stalker.  Y'know, as a hobby.

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