Is this sentance right?

2006-12-27 07:40:25

#1

FFLink: There is.; +1,380|6702|Devon, England

Ok, me and my friend are having a pointless argument... Is this sentance wrong:

"Well, that's the name that first came to my mind at first glance..."

He thinks that there shouldn't be need for the second first, but I do, as:

"Well if I hadn't put in the second "First", then the sentance could have been read as "The name that comes to mind whenever I glance at it" But it doesn't, as I remembered from the first glance that it didn't say "Toiletmade""

What do you think?

2006-12-27 07:41:21

#2

Ryan: Member; +1,230|6854|Alberta, Canada

It's xmas holidays, I don't think any of us need to be worrying about language and grammar.

2006-12-27 07:41:34

#3

SEREMAKER: BABYMAKIN EXPERT √; +2,187|6579|Mountains of NC

I think - take out the 1st "first"

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2006-12-27 07:43:59

#4

Janja: Jiggaboo Jones; +11|6393|FLOOR E DUH

who argues about grammar. i mean, seriously.

2006-12-27 07:45:54

#5

Mouse315: Bash.org Junkie; +105|6531

Where is Fenris_Greyclaw when you need him?

2006-12-27 07:52:22

#6

ssj3barua: Member; +55|6700|Indianapolis, IN, U.S.

He's right, lose the 1st first.

2006-12-27 07:53:32

#7

FFLink: There is.; +1,380|6702|Devon, England

Janja wrote:
who argues about grammar. i mean, seriously.

We're annoying little bitches.

2006-12-27 07:57:35

#8

coke: Aye up duck!; +440|6720|England. Stoke

Before worrying about grammar I would first learn how to spell the word "sentence".

2006-12-27 07:58:56

#9

Knifey McStabstab: Don't lock my topic!; +32|6519|Indiana

owned

2006-12-27 08:00:25

#10

Cheez: Herman is a warmaphrodite; +1,027|6450|King Of The Islands

Hi. Hello and welcome to The Redundancy Department Of Redundancy Dept., And hello.

Take out the first one.

My state was founded by Batman. Your opinion is invalid.

2006-12-27 08:01:04

#11

Simon: basically; +838|6669|UK

coke wrote:
Before worrying about grammar I would first learn how to spell the word "sentence".

God damnit I was going to say that >.<

Last edited by Simon (2006-12-27 08:01:20)

2006-12-27 08:03:25

#12

Toilet Sex: one love, one pig; +1,775|6583

Simon wrote:
coke wrote:
Before worrying about grammar I would first learn how to spell the word "sentence".
God damnit I was going to say that >.<

Me too

♥

2006-12-27 08:05:35

#13

FFLink: There is.; +1,380|6702|Devon, England

...

Twas a typo... *cough*

2006-12-27 08:07:46

#14

Dr0pped: Member; +8|6765|Ontario, Canada

Simon wrote:
coke wrote:
Before worrying about grammar I would first learn how to spell the word "sentence".
God damnit I was going to say that >.<

Ditto....

Additionally, the "me and my friend" has to go....

2006-12-27 08:11:07

#15

FFLink: There is.; +1,380|6702|Devon, England

:'(

2006-12-27 08:13:16

#16

Cheez: Herman is a warmaphrodite; +1,027|6450|King Of The Islands

Dr0pped wrote:
Simon wrote:
coke wrote:
Before worrying about grammar I would first learn how to spell the word "sentence".
God damnit I was going to say that >.<
Ditto....

Additionally, the "me and my friend" has to go....

Also formally, its 'Okay' not 'OK'.

Let's nit-pick some more!

My state was founded by Batman. Your opinion is invalid.

2006-12-27 08:18:12

#17

acidkiller187: Member; +123|6641

No sir! No way man! Negative sentance Copy over.

2006-12-27 08:29:39

#18

Vilham: Say wat!?; +580|6777|UK

The first glance bit shouldnt even be in there.

"Well, that's the name that first came to my mind" is all that is needed. How can you glance, something that requires looking, in your mind?

2006-12-27 08:40:38

#19

Penetrator: Certified Twat; +296|6519|Bournemouth, South England

Even the topic title is incorrectly spelt.

2006-12-27 08:48:22

#20

Kung Jew: That one mod; +331|6756|Houston, TX

For some reason, this season's posts are killing me. Sentances about treadmills n airplanes full of coors light cans....

I saw this one and wasted a much needed gulp of my morning coffee. Then I got to the rendundancy line and had to clean up the work counter, again. I'm running outta coffee, but you guys are killing me. Too funny.

KJ

2006-12-27 09:25:12

#21

Cheez: Herman is a warmaphrodite; +1,027|6450|King Of The Islands

Kung Jew wrote:
For some reason, this season's posts are killing me. Sentances about treadmills n airplanes full of coors light cans....

I saw this one and wasted a much needed gulp of my morning coffee. Then I got to the rendundancy line and had to clean up the work counter, again. I'm running outta coffee, but you guys are killing me. Too funny.

KJ

My state was founded by Batman. Your opinion is invalid.

2006-12-27 09:29:51

#22

TheOneAndOnlyX: Banned; +36|6385|Florida, USA

First of all you can even spell sentence, so don't even try to act sophisticated, if you can't spell worth shit.

2006-12-27 09:31:22

#23

deeznutz1245: Connecticut: our chimps are stealin yo' faces.; +483|6504|Connecticut

As mywife glances over my shoulder to ensure I am not viewing porn, she says: "Well, that's the name that came to mind at first glance...". She is a nurse, not an English teacher so who knows. *I got smacked*

Malloy must go

2006-12-27 09:34:32

#24

Kung Jew: That one mod; +331|6756|Houston, TX

TheOneAndOnlyX wrote:
First of all you can even spell sentence, so don't even try to act sophisticated, if you can't spell worth shit.

LMAO!!
Did you mean to type:

"First of all, you can't even spell sentence. So don't even try to act sophisticated if you can't spell worth a shit."

I believe you have owned ummm.... yourself?

this keeps getting better and better... I better get more coffee and brawny sheets.

KJ

2006-12-27 09:38:34

#25

Simon: basically; +838|6669|UK

TheOneAndOnlyX wrote:
First of all you can even spell sentence, so don't even try to act sophisticated, if you can't spell worth shit.

I love irony.

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