prototype
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a friend of mine left this poem as his suicide note,
he was 17 years old and he hung himself in his own back yard from an old oak tree the day before he graduated from HS on June 8th 1995

I am not good at "understanding" poetry

I played sports, got into a lot of fights and had too many GFs to be bothered with school work so I need some help trying to figure out what he meant when he wrote this.

thank you for any help that gets posted

"Untitled"

Look into my soul,
A pit that's very deep.
All you'll see's a hole
And a youthful mindless creep.
Like the night and day,
It comes and goes.
One day I'll pay and you all will know
The way I feel on this worthless planet.
I'll whine and squeal
Like a dying rabbit.
The pain you all see
Is all because of me.
Accept my apology and set me free.
Free from life, free from hell.
You'll see me dine in the place I dwell.
I ask you this and nothing more,
Let me die,
For I am sore.

Last edited by prototype (2010-06-30 22:41:25)

Superior Mind
(not macbeth)
+1,755|6883
It's typical teenage goth poetry. A fucking shame.
Uzique
dasein.
+2,865|6661
no offense to your friend but i woulda put a bit more work into my suicide poem

it doesn't really mean anything except:

- life sucks
- accept that i want to die
- im sorry but this is how i feel
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jord
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+2,382|6868|The North, beyond the wall.
15 years ago? Leaving it a bit late to try and understand arent you?
prototype
Member
+52|6502

jord wrote:

15 years ago? Leaving it a bit late to try and understand arent you?
i just "discovered" the poem while searching online
13/f/taiwan
Member
+940|5889
Speaking of suicide and poems, anyone know whatever happened to Lt.Jensen?
JakAttaK
csanva<3
+492|6516|England

13/f/taiwan wrote:

Speaking of suicide and poems, anyone know whatever happened to Lt.Jensen?
Last I knew of him he was trying to troll us by pretending to be a girl. Can't  remember what his username was though.
Uzique
dasein.
+2,865|6661
man that must have been a bitch...

there's no hidden messages in it, though... close the chapter
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m3thod
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JakAttaK wrote:

13/f/taiwan wrote:

Speaking of suicide and poems, anyone know whatever happened to Lt.Jensen?
Last I knew of him he was trying to troll us by pretending to be a girl. Can't  remember what his username was though.
amdi peter
Blackbelts are just whitebelts who have never quit.
BeardedHobo
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+53|5371|Flying in my boxcar.
It seems like your friend feels like he is not worth anything and is just burdening everyone he knows with his existence. By removing his life from this earth, which he feels is a hell for him, he will both liberate himself and relieve the load he has put on you.

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