stkhoplite
Banned
+564|6692|Sheffield-England
So i've been playing around with this music creator thingymabob, I decided to try actually making a decent tune.

It took me about 1 and a half hours to make. It was basically putting a bunch of sound files together, Sorry if it's a bit crappy.

robcr9 wrote:

youtube it, lol

i had to do it
At first i thought this guy was stupid but he gave me an idea to host it on youtube so you guys can stream it.

Thanks <3







Do you like it?

Constructive criticism only please <3

Last edited by stkhoplite (2007-12-28 15:02:08)

robcr9
Member
+111|6194
karma? this isnt begging or asking im asking for a reward, no bans plz

damn im telepathic i posted this b4 karma

Last edited by robcr9 (2007-12-28 14:58:23)

stkhoplite
Banned
+564|6692|Sheffield-England

robcr9 wrote:

karma? this isnt begging or asking im asking for a reward, no bans plz
Already gave
robcr9
Member
+111|6194
nice !
lavadisk
I am a cat ¦ 3
+369|7043|Denver colorado
You spend too much time on the transition. there are times where theres two melody's going at once and thats a big no-no.

and try watching the levels. when you put the beats together it sounds way too loud.


Other than that your off to a good start.

Last edited by lavadisk (2007-12-28 15:03:08)

kn0ckahh
Member
+98|6951|netherlands, sweet lake city
i don't like it, it just sounds like kiddy-house it's doesn't have any atmosphere try to use some heavy background tones and try beats that make your subwoofer explode
lavadisk
I am a cat ¦ 3
+369|7043|Denver colorado
Oh, and try crosfading a little. You know, thats how djs do it with their crosfader on the bottom of their mixer switching from table to table.

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